You did a really good job with your project, both telling us about a game I never knew about and showing us why it's appealing to so many people. I would work on stabilizing the volume a little more it was a little tough to hear at certain points, but overall sick job.
Nice job on the final- a big difference from the rough draft. I really liked seeing how you incorporated all of the classes feedback in the final. I especially liked how you got some shots of the MUB and room 207 so the viewer was grounded before diving into D & D. I liked how you interviewed a few more people as well. I really liked the close up shots of the game pieces, the girl writing on the game sheet, and the game book. Nice job using multiple media throughout the video to keep the viewer engaged. Have a good summer :)
Hey Joel,
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job with your project, both telling us about a game I never knew about and showing us why it's appealing to so many people. I would work on stabilizing the volume a little more it was a little tough to hear at certain points, but overall sick job.
Joel,
ReplyDeleteNice job on the final- a big difference from the rough draft. I really liked seeing how you incorporated all of the classes feedback in the final. I especially liked how you got some shots of the MUB and room 207 so the viewer was grounded before diving into D & D. I liked how you interviewed a few more people as well. I really liked the close up shots of the game pieces, the girl writing on the game sheet, and the game book. Nice job using multiple media throughout the video to keep the viewer engaged. Have a good summer :)